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My Last Day I'm Babylon

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Summary

A young man in ancient Babylon wakes up to find himself secured to a sacrificial altar. (Short Story)

Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

My Last Day In Babylon

Our little adventure takes place in the cultural capitol of Mesopotamia, 605 BC.


Darkness was descending upon Babylon and it was time to pick up Mylitta. We had been seeing each other for almost six weeks. My best friend had introduced us. She is so amazing!  Long dark hair, a slender waist, plus unbelievable breasts for her size. I love to watch them bounce as she walks, and so does everyone else. Other women glare at her with envy.


We found a romantic place to eat and I picked a table way in the back for some privacy. After dinner she was anxious to enjoy some intimate pleasure so we found a nice grassy spot beside the river. Both of us removed our robes and spread them out to lay down on. Her erotic charm made me happy to be alive. She said that she had a surprise for me and handed me a brightly wrapped piece of candy. I offered to share it with her, but she said that it was just for me. It tasted wonderful.


We continued to frolic under the moon light, but for some reason it was becoming impossible to concentrate. Why did I feel so sleepy? She laughed when she noticed I was having difficulty and began waving the candy wrapper in my face. That was the last thing I remembered...


I woke up the next morning in shock and disbelief finding myself totally naked and tied down to a sacrificial altar!  A group of young women had assembled around me dressed in long scarlet robes. One of them stepped forward.


"Good morning. I see the sedative has worn off. I hope we have made you comfortable."


"What the hell is going on here!! Where is my clothing and why am I tied down like this? How did I even get here?"


"Your girlfriend slipped you a little sleeping potion we provided. She was boasting about your uncommon size as we haggled over the price. You are obviously worth every shekel we paid."


"She SOLD me?? That BITCH !!!"


"Now calm down, if someone had offered me that much money, I would have sold my boyfriend too. It's easy to find another. And to answer your question, you were purchased to offer in tribute to Viagra, god of fertility."


I heard some snickering from the crowd as the priestess began to touch me. The congregation dropped their robes and moved closer. I was becoming quickly aroused by her curious hands and all those naked women. In a few moments everyone was admiring the result of their effort.


"Pardon me while I say a few words to my people."


"GREETINGS DEAR SISTERS, AND WELCOME ON THIS SPECIAL DAY OF OFFERING. AS YOU CAN SEE, WE HAVE AN EXTREMELY WELL ENDOWED CANDIDATE THIS YEAR, AND FOR THAT WE GIVE THANKS. LET US PRAY... OH GREAT VIAGRA, GIVER OF STRENGTH AND ENDURANCE, ACCEPT THIS OUR HUMBLE TRIBUTE, THAT WE MAY BE BLESSED WITH EVERLASTING PLEASURE. AMEN."


"JUST AS A REMINDER, LUNCH IS BEING SERVED DIRECTLY AFTER THE SERVICE, SO PLEASE STAY FOR SOME DELICIOUS FOOD AND CONVERSATION."


"NOW LET US CONTINUE OUR WORSHIP."


The priestess moved around to the back of the altar so everyone could see. I noticed her grin as my erection was anointed with oil, then she began gently milking me.  An assistant stepped forward holding a golden chalice. I could hear suggestive shouts of lust and desire from the congregation. Two younger girls pushed through for a better view. One of them began to dance and giggle while the another just watched and started to pleasure herself.


The priestess had a determined look on her face as she began stroking faster. I knew what everyone wanted to see, and it was pointless to resist. Soon I was pasionately moaning and pulling at the ropes. I could feel pressure building as my muscles tenced in frantic anticipation. Finally explosive surges sent my juices gushing into the waiting goblet. The crowd cheered as the priestess lifted the cup to her lips and swallowed...


'Well, I suppose that was entertaining,' I said to myself.


Then just when I figured the show was over, she turned and picked up a large metal blade and dramatically lifted it into the air.


"No wait, what are you doing?!!" I shouted in confusion.


"GREAT VIAGRA, ACCEPT THIS WORTHY SACRIFICE."


Her arm came plunging down just as the alarm clock went off...


Gasping for breath I clutched at my chest. I could hear Mom yelling something about being late for school when I realized that I was safe in my own room. I threw off the covers and found everything drenched in cum.


Damn that was so cool... 

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