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The island

" e author needs to learn what words to use that’s all. "

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Appereciation And Commission Request.!

"Just finished your story and I have to say it was truly compelling. Your characters felt alive and well-developed. I’m a comic/manga/Webtoon artist currently taking commissions (covers, pages, scenes). If you ever want to turn any part into visuals, I’d love to collaborate. Let's connect: flemingmichelle28"

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Great book

"I love this book. I'm fully enjoying it. There are a few grammatical errors, otherwise, excellent writing. Great characters and interesting plot "

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Good

"Good story set up"

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Seven days

"When I started reading, it was fine and then the plot became complicated and too unbelievable. I would have loved if it was shorter as it becomes tedious to read. Simple plots can be better sometimes "

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Today

"It’s great so far"

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