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Fatty Billionaire

"I like the plot and how the author brings the characters to live. Keeps you wanting to read more and more. Next chapter pleasee"

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Fatty’s Billionaire

"The story line is good and fast pace. Your prologue was slow and made me not want to read the story, so it’s something you may want to address going forward. I do hope you continue on your writing journey. "

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