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Becoming Mrs Sanchez becoming a Sanchez

"Such a great story really enjoyed reading this book would recommend this book as one of the best books that I’ve read Thank you "

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Spicy...

"I have mixed feelings about this story. The smut was great, it was really hot. The rest of the story was chaotic, it didn't make sense in alot of ways. For one it was supposed to be about Calus, but it was like the author was obsessed with Sander... I like Sander, it's just that you can't have the story description about one character, then mention or put more significance on another character. That just doesn't work, it takes the story completely off plot. All the character's did was fuck each other, and that part was all the story became about. Plus what happened to his brothers, they were just dumped from the story, which made no sense since he raised his brothers and was basically their father. The stories emphasis was about family, and yet the author takes out his main family, for a wife and two horny friends. His brothers should have been present through the entire story. I feel like the story just became way to immature, and pointless shit just was being thrown in that had no purpose at all."

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