What is your opinion?
Dragon Warrior
"Love love love! Really well done, the story grabs ahold of you as you follow Kendria’s climb from a poor villager to celebrated dragon shifting warrior. Everyone wants her for their own gain while all she’s ever wanted is to look after her loved ones and stand up for those weaker than herself. Once the villlian starts to ramp up, a lot happens that is amazing and scary and magical, I just wish some to it was explained but as we only get glimpses into other POVs maybe that’s intentional. Definitely recommend and will jump to the sequel. This author always writes the best FMCs and I’m liking the love interests and they both have feelings that conflict with duty/command and I’m hooked to find out how they play out!!!"
Dragon Warrior
"The opening draws one in. It allows the reader to wonder what was happening in the opening segment. Was too fast to realize the signicance of it. The way that you have developed the opening is good, but much too fast. Slow down the story's matrix. The story has a lot going for it, the way that you have created the interest in the story is good. We are wanting more details, why is the man chasing the fire breathing being. Who sent a fire ball their way. The woman wants to protect them both. He husband told her to stay inside the house. He wanted to see what this being was there. He walked toward the being that breathed the fire that they were aware of. They are concerned seeing it there. You have heightened the emotion of the reader who has read thr first three chapters. You are doing well to create an interest in the story you are writting about. Keep at it, you have quite the story here to read. Sincerely Richard"
AMAZING!
"Oh my gosh, I’m already loving Dragon Warrior even though I’m not halfway through yet! 😍 The story is beautifully written! The descriptions are vivid and really pull you into this magical, dangerous world. And the dialogues... sometimes they’re hilarious even when the situation is tense! I’m enjoying it even more since I was born in the year of the Dragon 🐉 and I have curly hair just like the main vibe! Absolutely hooked! ✨💖"
