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newlyweds new desires

"awesome book. the ending was kind of thrown together but overall a great book"

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Newlywed's New Desire

"Please read Chapter 24 soon can't wait I hope this is not the last chapter, I would like Tom to remind her, of her promise to him, that she would do anything he asked her to do, could be very exciting and besides I think she wold like to obey him"

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newly weds new desires

"I'm captivated and can't wait until I see segment 14. An outstanding erotic read. I love the plot and what will happen next. I want to follow this author."

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More.. Please finish the story with Ashley

"It was a great story but could you please finish the story with Ashley?"

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Newlyweds new desires

"That was hot and spicy 🔥🥵. Can't wait to read more."

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