Short & Strong Caffeine

"I have never read such a vividh and forceful short story. Nursing writer's from India have great talent. May you all appreciate the story and the essence. This short story can actually be expanded into a complete Novel. I think the ending was to premature and author decided to abruptly finish the story in 7 pages. There are hardly any stories capturing the culture of India. It might be difficult for international audience for relating with a place like Varanasi like we do, so may be more vivid storytelling is required keeping the audience in mind. Look forward to more writings from the author."