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Forbidden love

"I loved this story so much! I loved holden and carlee I can't wait to read more of their story! I loved that holden and carlee both got into their dream colleges I just know that they will get back together and be together! I loved Zack as well I know that he just wanted what was best for his sister but he should have been honest with his feelings more can't wait for his relationship with Lily to really show! "

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"I couldn't put this story down, damn it was GOOD!!!! I did feel all the abuse Holden took and went through was a little much but that was how the story was written. So looking forward to the next book !!!!!!!"

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Good plot but left up in the air

"The plot was good and even improved as it progressed till the end. There was no ending. It just left us up in the air. Had I known it would do this I probably wouldn't have read it. I don't like being left hanging. The characters are well developed and do pull you into their lives. "

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