What is your opinion?
Erris
"I I'm really enjoying it I would like to see the the other chapters because now I feel like I'm on a cliffhanger "
A fantastic story to learn from.
"What a fantastic read. I wasn't expecting Inkitt to give me such a wonderful story right off the bat, but I'm glad I found it. I almost can't believe this is just free to read on Inkitt. Denis McClean is very descriptive in his surroundings, and the "SETTING, SOUND, LIGHT, ACTION" beginnings of his chapters become like a formula. It's good and it helps set the reader up without having to explain the transition to each scene. It's also good that our protagonist is fairly knowledgeable in history and is able to fill in the gaps for readers who may not understand. I think a bit of an issue I have is that it's easy to get lost in the writing. I get a bit confused as to where we actually are, and sometimes it comes off as a bit clunky when Tadhg goes from explaining his whale situation to the car incident, and then back in again. This could be my perspective, but it's worth smoothing out and seeing how other commentators react when they read this story. Overall, definitely worth the read! It's great that people can learn things from it about Irish culture, and I would recommend that the next five chapters be put up!"
