What is your opinion?
MAGNETARA
"This was a really good story with beautiful, powerfully magnetic characters. The main plot, a fantastic tale of the hidden prophesy child, her mates and their purpose once mated. An incredible journey involving the Gods and evil forces and ultimately the war against the rival enemy. Peace is restored for a short time as the Guardians visit each Kingdom until it is time the mated four to visit the Underworld Kingdom. Here they are put to the test by Hades and some intense scenes of helplessness. Plenty of evil and betrayal. Plenty of love and sex. Then more sex! On the downside, there needs to be some commitment to editing where the grammar and spelling needs attention. Also, some chapters that were maybe too lengthy with little substance. This is where the momentum dwindled following the war and some of that could be shortened before the uptake of intensity in the Underworld. Overall, still worth a read because the characters and storyline beg you to continue to the end."
Spectacular story of pure magick!
"Everything about this book has been a grand experience to read. There is some proofreading that needs to be looked over again for the punctuation and spelling in some of the latter chapters. "
To Tame a Lost Star
"This story started with bullies we all have in life that is slowly diminished and obscured through magic. The love story is unique blending so many crystalized facets into one. The highs and lows are felt by the reader. Magestically surreal. 20+ yo reader, for complexity of relationships."
Good fantasy story
"The flow of the story overall is good, only for a bit of repetitiveness due to several POVs. Other than that, the story in itself is great."
Great Story!
"It is really an awesome book! It's very well written and interesting to read. The story and characters are great too. Thank you for this wonderful book! ššš»"
Name check, wording, check all need to be done
"Perfect combination of creating a desire to read more. It is not all about romance. Itās about power and all the things that draws one to the book. "
Amazing š
"Fantastic writing skill,good and creative plot,good sense of vocabulary and perfect way of portraying the characters šš»...eagerly waiting for next story..elariana's story "
When gods intervene
"Wow, the story was an interesting perspective on guardianship. Looking forward to the sequel "
Snej
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Most amazing thi g I have read in the sman of last year
"Very original plot, not similar to what you have read before. Deffinately worh reading, hard to gueswhat will come next. "
Avid reader
"Excellent ebook. Worth reading. Great storyline. Grammar is good. No mistakes that I found."
Excellent
"I love the story so far. I love Magnetara, I hope she becomes strong and shows her bullies her strength. Thank you author for your book. I can't wait for more."
Great Imagination
"This author has a great imagination. The plot is fantastic and the characters are complex. It just seems like this one story could turn into like 4 or 5 books. One to defeat Thelorin (if that was his name). One to find the dragons and earn their trust. One to go after the Fae and earn their trust. One to go after the other shifters and earn their trust. They could also have one with their children facing some disaster to come using the new council as closure to the series "
Magnetara
"I really did enjoy this story immensely, however I would not be a good reviewer if I didnāt mention a few things. Firstly I would like to offer what I loved. Magnetara is quite a brave young lady. She handled all her difficult situations with grace and her enemies with courage. Her matesā loyalty is inspiring. Such dedication is rarely seen or written about these days. They face life together and ask for help from the gods when it is needed. The only criticism of the characters in all of this is they seem a little too good. However, I think the author does a good job of revealing why. The plot had a great beginning but lost momentum when they took care of the primary antagonist. The second antagonistās time on the scene was short and not really built upon. The story ends well but needs some grip developed within the plot. "
Magnetara
"Great story! Enjoyed it very much š"
So promising
"Iām going to be very honest because as an author you have great promise and I hope to see your writing improvement greatly. The writing was so bad and all over the place it was hard to follow, on top of things not making sense for most of the time, and switching between one situation to another so quickly you canāt tell if itās a flashback or current event. I will say the FL sounds very immature as well, and tho I couldnāt bring myself to finish it Iām sure you might have written for her to come out this strong woman at some point, but itās a big mess from the beginning. Iām sorry this is the worst review Iāve ever written, but wow this was kinda hard to follow. "
