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A wonderful and unique take on a journey through the Afterlife

" “I just finished reading The Altered State of Exile, and wow—it’s such a unique and deeply introspective story. From the very first lines, I was drawn into Parasol’s world, struggling with depression and identity. The way the author captures her inner turmoil is so real and relatable, even as she journeys through the afterlife in search of answers. The writing is poetic, and the way the author blends fantasy with such raw human emotions makes it stand out. I can’t wait to see where this story goes next—please, keep going, because I’m hooked!” "

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