What is your opinion?
Starwhisper Journey
"Hi! Just finished reading this! Gotta say, I enjoyed reading the adventures they've had! 🌠 I really enjoyed seeing Harper getting into the Starwhisper Academy and how she started fitting in the academy! My favourite part was when they started going through some challenges and obstacles! Such As when they were going through a maze! Though I have to say, the entire book was endearing to read! 💫 Reading it, it felt as if I was reading a book of the Harry Potter series! On Harry Potter, Harry and his friends head to Hogwarts! And there are a lot of magic and professors who help Harry and his friends! Headmistress Elara reminded me of the Headmaster of Hogwarts, who is Professor Dumbledor! The Starwhisper Academy reminded me of Hogwarts school, and the ending somewhat reminded me of Gryffindor winning at the end of the first Harry Potter book! Made me feel as of this book was inspired by Harry Potter actually! 🤩 I enjoyed reading their adventures and the plot! I would've preferred to see some drama in the academy! For example, when Mira and her friend came towards Harper and insulted her, they're never shown again. I would've preferred seeing Harper and Mira battle each other in the Starwhisper Academy, or Harper defending herself when Mira speaks ill towards her. Not a big thing, though thought to point out if you'd like to add some rivalry in future books! 🤠 It also would've been interesting to see Harper's friends argue about something important. As in a disagreement maybe. It would add tension to the plot and a little bit of drama between their friends. Because everybody was always nice towards each other in every chapter, maybe adding a little bit of drama between their friendship would heat things a bit. Although these are just suggestions! 😀 Other than that, great work! Highly recommended to whoever reads this review! 💙"
Your fan
"Very well written book,I can not stop reading,I wish the chapters were a bit longer otherwise it's an excellent book.i am absolutely shocked that a 13 year old can write this book,you are a very good example for your generation ❣️☺️"
thrilling chapter
"This chapter was even more thrilling than the last one! From start to finish, it had me on the edge of my seat. The suspense and excitement were palpable, with each twist and turn in the plot making my heart race faster. The author masterfully built up the tension, leading to a series of unexpected revelations and heart-stopping moments that kept me utterly engrossed. I found myself completely absorbed, unable to put the book down as I eagerly devoured each page. It was an exhilarating reading experience that surpassed the excitement of the previous chapter, making it an absolute joy to read."
Aveviloon
"I like the story, but seems to repeat things. Sometimes think wait I already read this."
Just Another Writer
"Hey Khadija! It's me, Hareem. To tell the truth, the story's pretty good, Khadija. You've clearly covered the magic element in the novel. There's also mystery and suspense in it, not to mention it's filled with fantasy. There's just one drawback, though. You've repeated several paragraphs in the first two chapters and I feel like the chapters are just too short. I'd have loved it if you'd made them longer. Great novel, by the way. I loved it! Let me know when you'll be continuing it. Can't wait for the rest!😉😁💕💖🌹"
