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"I love the references to the song and the way you worked them in, although it would have been nice to of had Harry giving Lily Luna butterfly kisses. My eldest daughter was small when the song came out, and it became our tradition to do butterfly kisses. Now my little red haired, green eyed girl has a red haired, blue eyed girl of her own, who's daddy will be giving her butterfly kisses of her own... And life goes on... Hammy"

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