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What is your opinion?
Please complete the story
"I just wish this story could be completed, i love it and I have been eager wanting to know what happened next"
Punctuation
"Loved story, but the lack of commas and directing was huge."
Phantised
"Perfect grammatical outline"
Phantasm
"I dskije the fact that Ian and frost do not want to know the other dude of lenah and why can't James just man up and tell lenah that he loves her"
Phantasm
"Interesting and addictive "
Phantom
"Awesome writing I'm thrilled even as I am reading, I can't wait to see the ending "
Top notch
"Beautiful writing,I love how she doesn't give a clue as to what's coming.the characters leaves one thinking and going back n forth...playing with a readers mind in a way that leaves the them glued and wanting more"
Phantasm
"Very interesting plot"
Phantom
"Interesting story "
