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Strong story, not like other mafia books

"I fell in love with the characters. The female character was not kidnapped by the bad guys as in other mafia books. The story focused on the love between them in its own flow. We witnessed the change of both characters over time. I loved this book. Eliza became like a friend for me. I was sad that the book ended. Congratulations, author!!! "

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Captive of Desire

"So enjoyed reading this novel without twisting plots. "

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Thank you

"Wow! Such a powerful ending to the story thank you for the bonus chapters. They really really helped out a lot. I look forward to the book about Victor Adrian thank you for sharing your talents with us readers."

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Good reading

"It was great. I learn to improve my English by reading.it is a real pleasure with this kind of reading."

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Hooked

"Omg I am hooked. I am loving the book cannot wait to keep reading it. "

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Captive of Desire

"Absolutely loved it!!!!"

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So far so good!

"I like the style of the writer You can see the feelings and thoughts of the characters. Strong story, keeps you wonder. Good job!!"

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Enjoying the book.

"The book is very enging m having a hard time putting it down. And I gave it 5 stars it's Avery pood book I have not read so good of a book before. The writer sure can keep you lntreiged. And her writing and words are capavading I'm enjoy this book a lot can't waste to read more. "

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Desire

"Really enjoying this"

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Well written exciting story

"Kept me wanting more with each chapter. Riveting sensual writing of lobe and danger "

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Destiny

"The flow of the story is smooth.,engaging and the characters are strong and have their own distinctive character that i find interesting "

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"I like eliza"

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