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Unique
"Just loved your work, very unique. I don’t if it’s me or what but please add more scene description, it helps to visualise better. Keep up the great work, more power to you. "
Great Story!
"The Writing style is really unique and interesting. Reading from a child's perspective was very different and enjoyable, adding some extra layers to the story and characters. As a suggestion, at times, the story was a little confusing and difficult to follow. A little more information about the world and characters would help with the reading experience. There were some grammar issues and repeated words, but that's a small flaw. Good read! and good work. : ) "
