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Absolutely love this story

"I love the way this is written. The characters are so well described with such big and beautiful personalities. My favorite part so far is seeing Billy's sweet side since he and Doe became an item. I can picture so clearly this big tattooed guy in Doe's kitchen packing her mom lunch to take to work. What could possibly be cuter then that? The only down side is the chapters not coming out fast enough. Lol"

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Yassss!

"I absolutely love the group of guys.. And I love how Billy is seriously trying so hard to be better for Doe.. even if he says he’s not a good man and blah blah, You can tell that Doe has the ability to make him better. I’m really glad she finally realized she does want him too. When all the boys jumped on a plane without a second thought to be there when Billy called about her.. OMG my hearrttt! The writing is FANFU*KINTASTIC! I can’t wait until they finally give in to all their sexual tension.. BABBYYYY! I hope you don’t hold back on us. Hah! I’m crossing my fingers and holding my breath that they get a happy ending, but that we see them as a couple first.. And how they are “normal”.. You are so talented, thank you for sharing this story with us! Xx"

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