Inkitt
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Interesting

"I loved the originality of the book and the fact that I feel as if I am there. I can see everything happening and it is so good. I do understand this was a short stroy but I do feel more background information and details about her and her friend would have really helped build the story a lot more. I do feel as this book would have been better as a novel. I would be really interested to see it as a full length novel."

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locked in time

"this story is so good and i cant wait to see what else you write/publish :)"

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