Socks Are Meant for Feet

"This particular poem was not that great. But I see a lot of potential here. I would suggest you read a book called "Sound and Sense" by Lawrence Perrine. I would also suggest that you read more poetry of the kind that you want to write. I am sure about the title of the book, I am not sure about the spelling of the author's name. It'll give you a lot of hints about how to read and write classic poetry as well as poetry of other genres. At any rate, please keep trying."