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What is your opinion?
This one/s for Mother Nature
"I would say that it would be more effective if you cut down on the swearing and the use of foul language. the use of foul language has more effect if you use it sparingly rather then sprinkling it all over the place."
good reads
"I understand there is a following for this type of expressive poetry, however, it was not to my taste, that said, you were brave to openly release your thoughts to the world, few will be shocked by it but some will find enjoyment and pleasure, so for those I have rated two 4s and two 3s.,"
