Inkitt
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Elijah

"Enjoyed the story, but it was hard to keep some of the characters straight! But, I wanted a different ending! Have to wait!"

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A Flurry of Scenes.

"I like this book because the author has such a way with words. However, I feel that TOO much really do be going on at the same time! I mean, your girl is already struggling to keep up with– what's happening, the setting, what the characters are doing, how they look like... but all of a sudden, we going onto the next scene and moving too damn fast. 🥲🥲🥲😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨 @darkblonde1 Let's try to slow down the pacing, babes. 🤧🫶🩷🥹"

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