The End

"It's a good story, needs to be edited because some of the paragraphs repeat in some chapters, words need to be checked. Besides that, the protagonist repeats a lot of phrases about how they need to be stronger and break the manipulation a bit too much, I get that it is her determination and resolve to get through her obstacles but at least change it up a bit and say it less or in a different way. Some of her inner monologue is really unnecessary. The beginning of her training with Vivienne and the things she was doing with her, I got lost a bit, their relationship wasn't clear but at the end it turned out to be a really good friendship blooming, I am sad she died. All in all it's a good story, a good read, I look forward to future uploads of the story if any❤️"