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Need more

"Love it can’t wait for more "

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Wiseone

"Very well written. SPaG correct.. Brill"

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Update?

"Waiting for updates. The story keeps you interested "

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Easy to give up

"Looking forward to more of this story"

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Good book

"Enjoying book so far looking forward to the rest of the story "

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Easy to give up

"Where can you find the finished version "

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Good so far!

"Love it so far! "

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Sad story so far

"Really like the Mom and how she is handling her situation of infidelity. Strong character with so much personal pain. This is so far in the early stages of the story so I’m hoping to see more in the immediate future. So far it compelling."

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Easy to give up

"Wow... another amazing and fantastic story you have written. I loved it. I have loved all your stories that I've read. Keep up the awesome job you are doing."

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Easy to give up

"Excellent storyline portraying real emotions regarding cheating and lfc rebuilding her life "

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Good book.

"It was a bit triggering to me but I really did enjoy it. There were a few mistakes but I overlooked them. "

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Easy to Give Up

"Great story and even greater ending."

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Easy to Give Up

"I liked the characters and the interactions between them. Some spelling and grammar errors but not anything that retracted from the story. "

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Easy to give up

"Great story I really enjoyed it, kept me engaged and didn’t repeat information over and over and over to lengthen story. Love the pace at which the story unfolded."

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Easy To Give Up

"This is a good novel, the fact that it's not the same as most and the woman stay strong and true to herself and doesn't just run back and put up with the situation just because he says 'Sorry'."

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Absolutely LOVE this

"Absolutely loved this story! I’m not usually one to read a story with cheating but I made the exception for this one because it drew me in so quickly. I loved the whole storyline. I would also love to see a sequel or side story for Marie and Leonard. I’m glad she also got her happiness. If you ever publish this story as an actual book I’ll be there to buy it. It is one that would be a good reread/comfort read. "

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Good read

"I love a story where the woman doesn’t give up the guy a chance and has self respect . She up left and never looked back and it was a good happy ending all round so while you was mad at the affair he slightly redeemed himself at the end ."

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Easy reading

"I’m a sucker for a good cheating trope! Especially when the h isn’t spending half the book wallowing in self pity and you end up reading it, screaming at the book for her to get a grip. Calliope has self worth in masses and while she is hurt she isn’t broken which I love. Major upgrade new H doesn’t hurt either 😆. I find this book really easy to read the authors writing style is fab in my opinion. Deffo on my re-read list! "

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Love this!

"Very good book with some unique twists"

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Well written

"Well written I love that she is not being written as bitter. I am enjoying that he is really just as dumb as he seems "

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