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Interesting

"I really like this story as it keeps me intrigued throughout the plot. It is a unique take on the lighthouse and I really enjoy it. "

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Keep going❤️

"Where are they going ? So basically her job was not the lighthouse ? Intresting story please proceeed! Dont stop because u dont get feedback ! Your a good writer so dont be insecure about it please proceed i want to know where the story leads. It looks sometimes like a horror story its keeps me captive 🤩"

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Makes you want to read more!

"First I feel bad for her, cause honestly going through all that is just crazy n heartbreaking but she has found resolve so far! The way thus story is written gives you everything you want to know and find out quickly which is how I love these books, something is really good I just binge it all! We all learn from our first book in writing of Grammer, trust me I'm still trying to find a good one for my android phone. Book is a must read!"

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Short but interesting

"The chapters are really short and the language is easy to understand. The story itself is very intriguing and I want to know more about her and the lighthouse she’s in. Very interesting and simple but perfect. XX Karmen Kay"

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Great book

"The writing is good. It makes the story come to life. Good job describing scenes, letting the reader imagine what the character is seeing. And great job on using patience waiting to write the climax when it seems best."

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Lighthouse under the surface

"I like each and every sentence in this book. It's just so good. The way she just end the chapter is making us lack of patience to know about what happens next. No grammar mistakes and writing skills are so good. "

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A Brilliant Concept

"I've never read or seen a story about a light house but this really captured my attention. I wasn't able to guess the direction of the story but I think it will lead to some exciting discoveries. However I'm abit disappointed that the prologue was about too short, maybe you could add some details like how she met her boyfriend and what exactly attracted him to her. The story is filled with mystery and I'd highly recommend, the grammar is smooth, not perfect but better than some. Keep going."

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Intriguing story!

"The story is quite fast-paced, but it has a lot of potential. The lighthouse mystery is definitely intriguing and there are several things that make me very curious, like the sister. Hope to read more about that. Then there's the mystery man who suddenly appeared in a magical way. Very curious to see how this continues!"

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