What is your opinion?
The rejected Luna strikes back
"Very well structured story "
Dram
"Enjoying it so far"
I enjoyed it so far
"But since I only get a few chapters at a time, I get frustrated. & forgot what previously happened in the story. "
His rejected Luna strike back
"I like the book so far but there are several misspelled words and wrong words in different places. I definitely recommend proofreading it again. I assume the title should be “strikes back”. "
His Rejected Luna Strike Back
"A good story, thougj the characters See very stubborn and stressful "
rejected luna strike back
"I enjoyed the first chapter and was looking forward to reading more. Where is the rest of the story?"
Tedious
"i like the plot but it needs to be less repetitive. You made it apparent that Lia is manipulative so move the story along and quit rehashing "
His rejected Luna strike back
"This was a very hard book to get into. There was a lot of repeated information. Perspective of writing seemed off. Very catty. "
