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AWESOME🔥

"I love detailed universes !!! Keep up the good work aniki !!! 🔥"

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Apocalypse: mad

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Too many chapters

"This story, while intriguing has too many chapters. It gets tiring moving from chapter to chapter. I like what you're writing, but when I see that many chapters, it makes me wonder if you shouldn't expand on the story and break it into multiple books. "

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