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Yes.

"This book was so fucking good. Hopefully there's more entries in this world, because I'm already ready for more. Please...."

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LOVE LOVE LOVEEE

"I absolutely love this story!! Beautifully written :)"

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Philo

"The story is great! I think it would help if the font was different when Dewey is dreaming or having a memory. I got a bit confused in the first chapter but understood what was happening as I continued reading. It would have been nice to hear Rowan's inner monologue and see his character more clearly defined, especially in terms of how he thinks, operates, and views Dewey. I understand that the story is mainly based on Dewey's experience, though. There are minor spelling errors, but they don't detract from the story. I believe it's written in the third person, but in my opinion, that distance slightly reduces the connection with the characters. Overall, it’s a good read with a happy ending for the main characters. I really enjoyed the book!"

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