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Good Story

"I like the book so far. The plot is something different to other books. The characters are special, a little dark, a little dangerous. Nice to read. "

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Second book?

"I loved this book! Is the god of war the second book to this one? "

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Legacy of the Forbidden King

"I love it and can't wait to see what happens next "

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Alpha King Junior

"This is the nicest novel ever well done to the writer"

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😻😻😻

"So far good I am enjoying the story has been interesting to read and I am looking forward to seeing where it goes "

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In love with it!

"I read the first five chapters in one sitting and couldn't put down. I loved the wolf, and their banter was funny. The story is only starting, but I can't wait to read more and see where it's going. "

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Interesting story

"I find the story interesting with twists and turns continually and often when you don't expect them.Good read and Wirth the time!"

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Sociopathy run wild.

"For the first time since I discovered Galatea and Inkitt I am stopping a story before it finishes. I just can't continue. The sheer barbarism the supposed heroes show when they torture the main characters just lost it for me. The malice in their expressions as they work their magic on them, supposedly for a good cause but really? Those little bastards not only enjoyed the pain they were causing but got off on it. The Mom wasn't any better, keeping her other half locked up, doing whatever she wanted despite the Dad's insistence on avoiding issues? Not the Brady bunch here folks. Then blaming all their actions on fate, like it was unavoidable. You can't tell me they couldn't find another way to get that done without the brutality. If that's what the heroes look like? then maybe they need to lose this battle. The first 20 chapters held such promise, it looked like it would evolve into something decent. Then a switch turned and the monsters showed up. Maybe this all ends well, maybe there's a justifiable reasoning for the monstrous actions of the twins, maybe....but I won't read it. "

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