What is your opinion?
Review
"I really loved your writing, Nyomi. I found it hilarious is that you have to get married in order to have a “queen.” LOL. Imagine your parents pulling out random girls everyday. But the idea is intriguing for sure. Good work! Looking forward to completing this (someday ;) "
Great main character
"What stood out to me about this story is the main character and how relatable he is. I like it when stories show us that even the lives of princes aren’t perfect and that they have their own set of problems, which is exactly what this story does. The main premise is a good one that allows the author to explore what it means to be a prince and all the pressure a prince is under. The dialogue in this story is well-written, and it reveals so much about the main characters and their values. However, at some point, the princess starts to feel a bit like a caricature of a person, as it felt that she could be a bit less direct and spoiled, but then again, maybe that was the point, to show how out of touch with reality these people are. All in all, a great story. It makes you want to know more and hope for a happy ending for the main character."
