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What is your opinion?

Well I technically like this novel but there are few grammatical errors that needs to be looked after.

"Well I liked the plot and the way characters are described. Only if black family members except walburga would have been added. Or if potraits of Potters would have been there then it would have been more interesting. So far it's a good novel."

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Good Story

"Needs a Betra to correct spelling and grammar,but,thoroughly enjoyable all the same. Hope you will update a new chapter or two soon!"

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