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Vestigios en campo de corazón abierto

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Summary

A medida que crecemos, vamos recopilando experiencias que moldean nuestro destino. Las decisiones que tomamos, incluso las más inocentes, tienen el poder de cambiarlo todo. En el camino del corazón, a lo largo de nuestras vidas, pasan sinnúmero de personajes que dejan huella de cierta forma. Es por eso que cuando hablamos de aquel campo dorado, cuyas flores florecen del calor de las sonrisas, se nutren de acciones y palabras afectuosas y finalmente, se marchitan mediante la amargura de las lágrimas, las cosas se complican. En este poemario, he retratado los vestigios que he encontrado en el campo de mi propio corazón, cuyas puertas han permanecido abiertas por un largo tiempo para cualquiera que me brindara un poco de calidez, ternura, y más tarde, una desazón que me causó en aquel jardín, la mayor de las penumbras.

Status
2yrs ago
Chapters
2
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Desventura

Amor, un rojo al vivo,

amor, un carmesí atractivo,

amor, color de la misma venganza,

amor, indicio de gloria y amenaza.


Inicia como un leve sonrojo,

como inquietos piojos,

insectos, asquerosos,

significativos y odiosos.


Tan hábil como el aleteo de una mariposa,

revolotea en tus órganos internos,

tal como es descrito en viles cuentos:

el amor se encuentra en tu cuerpo.


Sueña con ilusión la existencia de cura,

que extinga aquella perdición que hoy perdura,

aunque siempre habrá una cosa segura,

te arriesgas al dolor, tras un poco de aventura.

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