Inkitt
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By far the best

"I love how its been written, the author adding heart warming scenes, as well as, well written cliff-hangers making the story more suspense and engaging to read. Otherwise great job to the author, keep up the great work and I hope we can get chapters in the future! Also to the author, please make sure to get enough rest and take care of your health because overall we as the audience want a great story but we also want out author to be healthy, happy and enjoy writing their novel."

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Lanell

"It is taking Amora a while to come around. I understand she us scared. But I'm enjoying reading this novel. "

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Ash you pick my interest so much. I need more story. I love how you are drawing the mates together.

"I am wanting a Happily Ever After. Please finish what you started.❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥 love is a grand connection between two souls."

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Starlight Promise "Bound to the Lycan

"I love it so far and can't wait to see what happens next "

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Starlight promise"bound to the lycan".

"I just started this book and so good,can't wait for the next chapter "

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Human mate

"I like the mystery to this story setting. It's make me want to read more. I do not dislike anything yet. I want to continue reading. I would recommend this to my friends .. "

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Dragged out

"If I wasn’t a strong fan of shifter books, this one kind of drags the storyline out with a lot of “fill in” words."

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Good storyline

"Too wordy, multiple paragraphs to describe a bathroom. I get it..it is a nice bathroom but I eventually jumped the paragraphs until that scene was finished. imagery is OVER used…uses the same phrases over and over again. Try to find another way to say “the weight of” and the air “was thick with”. Tension is a word that is used A Ton! I get there was tension but either say it was tense and move on or describe it in a different way. The story line is good. Most of the dialogue is ok. It is a little confusing when he saves her from the rogue wolf. It states something like you saved me to Zale like she new he was the wolf and even talks about the beast and the man but then later she doesn’t know it is him when he is in the garden with her? And I am sorry but she is alone emotionally at her house with her dad in addition to getting beat up all the time and she is going to break down when he leaves her locked in a room for three days? Aside from the fact that do these people not realize that a human (which she supposedly is) can’t live without food and water for three days?"

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