Inkitt
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Very good

"I like this story, it's a little different, it has its suspenseful moments, betrayal, darkness, friendship, I'm glad the boys worked it out in the end. Very good."

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Plot-driven story with sharp dialogue

"A fast-paced amalgam of murder mystery and love story with endearing characters and crisp dialogue. Characters could have done with a bit more development to make Jaden's evolution more plausible. Even so, they were well drawn and I was rooting for them."

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