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Summary

Story of a magician and how his wrong deeds boomeranged into harming himself.

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Author
Aditya
Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

I am pupeteer.

Once up a time their was a magician called Qaza. He had disciple called Aseem. Both spent most of time roaming and visiting new places. Once they came across a beautiful village. They performed magic there. However villagers were not impressed by their magics. Some even made their fun. Qaza did not like villagers  attitude.



Saddened by the mockery they left the village. Qaza could not come out of the pain of disgrace. Alone he roamed in the jungle. He saw animals playing. Watching these animals he came up with plan. He used his magic and converted animals into human form ( their shape had changed. They were still animals from within). Animals memory were erased. Now these animals were mere puppet in hands of magician.


Magician now had an army of unthinking followers. How lacked intelligence of cross questioning. Together with these army Qaza and Aseem took over the village. Their greed did not stop here. They annexed more territories.



Magicians was happy with his doing. He loved his new found greatness. Aseem too liked his new role of ruler. However he wanted more. He used his magic trick to hypnotize Qaza's daughter. Qaza did not like this. He had quarrel with Aseem regarding this. He chased Aseem out of his kingdom. Aseem did not like this. Day night he plotted a plan to win his kingdom back from Qaza.



He prepared a new army of animals. He used same spell to change their form. These new beings were more foolish. More aggressive and more violent. They took no time in winning back the kingdom for Aseem. Qaza was thrown in jail.



Qaza day night grieved. He wanted to take revenge from Aseem. But he could not do anything. All he could do was grieve. Time healed some of his pain. He realised he was caught on jail of his own doings. It was his karma coming back to him. He took over the village using his magic. Now he was getting the same treatment. He could now feel the pain of villagers. He concluded once he had decided to take revenge from villages. This made his student evil and destroyed many lives. Taking revenge was of no use. He decided to perform penance for his mistake.



Days passed by Aseem realised his army was getting  more and more violent. He lacked the knowledge of controlling  them now. Neither he could see love in eyes of Qaza 's daughter. She was more like puppet than his lover. Aseem felt alone. He missed his fatherly figure Qaza. He repented turning against Qaza. He felt sorry for everything. He removed his spell from everyone and asked for Qaza 's forgiveness.


Qaza forgived him. In some time everything came back to normal. Once everything was ok, duo once again started their journey of performing magic at different places.

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