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Her wish was not supposed to be command for me!

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Summary

Story of a women and her experiences with a living stone.

Genre
Other
Author
Aditya
Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Her wish is not my command!

Once there was a man called Eerina who had a  stone who was alive. Eerina had named this stone Shanti

  Shanti (stone) was a type of being who appeared like a stone from outside but was a living being. Just like any other living being he used to eat food. Stone was capable of doing miracles only when man directed him to do so.   Whatever man imagined stone could give him that. Like stone could create light in darkness, food when man was hungry, act like tool.for making houses etc.


Things was going fine until  one day when a fight broke between Eerina and another man Prashant. Prashant  hit Eerina with a stone( normal non living being) and ran away. Prashant did not know about existence of Shanti.


Eerina  was saddened she at once instructed Shanti to create a cloud and attack Prashant with all his might. Shanti too was hurt to see how Prashant had hit Eerina. He too wanted revenge for his friend. He created cloud and started pelting hail on Prashant. Though Prashant was not hurt he was terrified.

Once again Eerina used the stone to creat a voice in mid air and said " You coward. Why are you running away."


That 's when Prashant realized that he had done mistake. He asked for Eerina's forgivness.



Meanwhile Shanti who used his power to attack Prashant had become weak. It had happened so that he was bound by rule that he cannot physically hurt man. If he did he will have to pay its  consequences. Shanti asked for Prashant 's forgivness and her body started to become normal again. He decided from now on I will use my powers responsibly. If ever Eerina again asks me to hurt anyone I will refuse.


Prashant too had forgiven Eerina


Later on Eerina told Prashant about Shanti and it's magical power. They realised that it was a powerful stone which has to be used responsibly.

Later on they did many miracles using the stone. One day they even  asked Shanti to convert into human from outside. He happily did byt everything was not fine. As he could not understand human 's emotion and wants as it is as from within he was a stone. Eerina realised he r mistake and asked Shanti to take back its normal form. Things became peaceful once again.



Moral - If one is powerful or he has something powerful in his posession. That person should not be in haste to use it. Instead he should use it responsibly. It does nt take to much time to make mountain out of molehill.

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