What is your opinion?
Elementals
"Great story so far I was hooked by the end of the first page "
Elemental
"It's an interesting story so far. I do hate when they stop in the middle of an action scene. While they do it on TV to get you to watch the next season in a book it's unnecessary "
Review of the first 5 chapters
"- The story build is really good this far! I love the exotic idea of humans genetically mixed with the elements of the periodic table, the atomic hybrids. - I love Iodite's character, though you could emphasise her nervousness in the spotlight of her own power. - We share one problem though: You're giving Hyde the typical bad-boy with a soft heart for his innocent crush. I don't really know how to advise with this! Anyway, I'd just like to say it's been captivating to read, and I really hope you'll post more Elemental content soon!"
