Inkitt
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Appereciation And Commission Request.!

"Just finished your story and I have to say it was truly compelling. Your characters felt alive and well-developed. I’m a comic/manga/Webtoon artist currently taking commissions (covers, pages, scenes). If you ever want to turn any part into visuals, I’d love to collaborate. Let's connect on Discord: flemingmichelle28"

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Wow

"Rollercoaster ride, loveit"

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When the Mafia Falls in Love

"Okay, I was really enjoying this story and thought it was complete. My bad for not reading the authors notes. Damn !"

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When the Mafia Falls inlove

"All in all the book is nice to read, recommended to guys like me who loves Cinderella stories"

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Great

"The story has a good flow Very captivating and makes the reader want more"

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Tik tok

"It's great absolutely loving the story unfold"

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it's damn good , keep going author

"it's cute and hot"

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Excellent work good read

"Ibtreging good suspense well written good story line interesting and funny "

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The use of such authentic grammar and language the sex scenes are fire

"Use of Gramma the use of language sex scenes are fire keep it up love from me "

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Great so far

"Good character development and great dialog between the characters. You can really see that Angel is a strong character now."

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Don’t know

"I’m liking the read, never liked the “daddy” thing. Truly believe some Italian pet name would have fit better"

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When the Mafia falls in love

"Interesting plot and author manage to keep us wanting for more"

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When the Mafia falls in love

"Interesting changes in plot. Good witing, you really define each character. Victoria's was not what i expected. She's still a "spoiled rich bitch". Looking for a different change in Salvatore because he met his match with Angel."

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Love

"Very spicy and interesting can't put it down so captivating thank you author"

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Mafia fallen in love

"I like the story of the novel my best friend recommended this app or this novel to read cause I like to read love story the quality and story both are amazing "

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Intriguing

"I gave the book Highmarks because it kept my interest. The plot is easy to follow and the grammar and punctuation seem to be correct. I really enjoyed the book."

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Lanka

"I like the story line. Its very intersing. "

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Nice story

"I like the story line but hate the fact you can't read without having to post something. I thought it was supposed to be free."

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