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OMG!!

"Whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaattt!!"

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Sone lines are not clearly visible

"The plot , twists and their chemistry is so far so good "

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Inside of a cube

"I can not stop laughing!!! "

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Im crying

"Wait is that it???? Wft this isnt over yet right??? It cant be... im sooo freaking mad rn. Why?? Why writer why??? Why it had to be her brother not someone else? Why it had to be her best friend ? Not someone else?? Why man... seriously why??? This isnt fair. I laughed so hard when i first start to read this. I thought to my self man this shit gonna be funny af but now im bawling my eyes.... why??? Im just speechless. I cant even think of anything. How could her brother be such a monster / phycopath?? This is not okay man im not happy with this god damn ending. This isnt a ending. To hell man i dont wanna hear nothing but call this a nightmare/ dream and end it please... what bout seb??? Nah man nah. Im not okay ;( "

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