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Definitely recommend

"Really enjoyed reading this book. It's an interesting, erotic, and is written well."

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The Guard on Duty

"Spicy and Hot!!!!!❤️‍🔥"

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"Sexy very sexy"

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Very beautifully written plot.... Engaging n hot chemistry of the leads. I like how they both are developing

"I like the character development "

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Sexy

"Very good details"

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Mrs C-R

"Enjoyed the experiences of these 2 humans falling in love "

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Lovely

"This was sweet and sexy. Didnt feel forced. Just lovely"

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I got shivers - this was so good

"Just a couple of minor spelling or gramma errors. Great writing. Hot hot hot with a twist of sweet love."

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Newbie

"Great sex… man I wish for an experience like hers."

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Interesting Short Read

"The story is interesting and steamy. Only a few things throw me with this. It says he works there but he actually doesn't. It's a sex club where people are actually paying others to find them people to have sex with so they don't have to go looking for it just anywhere. Also her skin tone changes in the story. There's also the lack of explanation on why Troy tensed up when she called him by the name and if that is actually his real name or if he is in fact playing a character. And I think a big thing bothering me is the fact that no protection is used. I mean I get she's a virgin but he's obviously not and what about unwanted pregnancy?!. And is he really 44 years old? They paired him with a recently turned 18 year old virgin?! That's insane! And a HUGE age gap. Which may bother some, so a warning would come in handy. "

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