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Whispers of the Veil: The Alpha’s Mate

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*2025/2026 New Edited Version of Original 2022-2024 Manuscript.* In the ancient forests beyond the mortal realm, the Thorne clan of wolf shifters stands guard over a fragile boundary—the veil separating the realms. Lukan Thorne, the Alpha’s second son, has always lived in the shadow of expectation, never meant to inherit power…until destiny begins choosing him anyway. As unexplained creatures stalk the borders and the land itself shows signs of corruption, something long-buried is stirring. The darkness has been waiting for the right moment to rise. Cynthia Everly’s world is quiet—until an ancient force calls to her and begins to awaken within her, blurring the line between dreams and memory, turning them into omens, and pulling her toward a realm she never knew existed. When Cynthia and Lukan meet, their bond ignites instantly—primal, undeniable, and dangerously powerful. But as rivalries deepen and ambition fractures the pack, the corruption finds a willing foothold in Lukan’s older brother, Kalael, the current Alpha heir, whose hunger for power makes him the perfect pawn. With the veil weakening and an ancient evil hunting their awakening power, a love that transcends centuries may be the only force strong enough to hold the realms together—before the darkness claims them all.

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
20
Rating
5.0 4 reviews
Age Rating
18+

Prologue

15 Years Ago…

Lukan stood at the edge of the sacred stream, its water shimmering as it reflected the sunlight that filtered through the trees. A cool breeze stirred his dark, curly hair as he stared at the reflective surface, gazing into his own eyes and deep into his thoughts. “This year, I have to win. I am going to win,” he vowed quietly.

Lukan was only fourteen, already feeling the weight of expectation on his shoulders. This year, he would prove himself to his clan, especially to his father, the Alpha of the Thorne Clan. He would no longer be seen as a weak boy or the runt of the clan. He would make his mark at the Rite of the Wild ceremony and claim his rightful place as a worthy son of Alpha Raffi Thorne and a strong wolf-shifter like the rest.

The Rite of the Wild is an annual midsummer ceremony, a two-part hunt once reserved only for young male shifters between the ages of thirteen and eighteen to test their strength, stealth, and ability to connect with their primal wolf spirits. Over time, however, the tradition evolved to include female shifters. This change came a few hundred years ago when a female shifter died defending her clan from rogue wolves. Because of her, female shifters were no longer limited to serving as village guards; they also became clan warriors and hunters.

The ceremony marks the transition to adulthood and honors the ancient duty and oath sworn by the first Alpha wolf-shifter to the Ancient Wolf Guardian. This sacred pact binds the clan to protect the mystical, supernatural, and natural realms. The Rite challenges young shifters’ strength, wisdom, and spirit, ensuring they are worthy of their legacy as appointed guardians.

On the first day, the young shifters are tasked with hunting in their natural human form, relying on their basic agility, intelligence, and strategy. Discipline demands that they remain in control and not mindlessly rely on their wolf’s instincts, for shifting is a gift reserved for moments of true necessity and a choice that should be made only with pure intention, not as a crutch, and never in malice.

On the second day, they shift into their wolf forms, allowing them to tap into their primal instincts and connection to nature. They are tested on how well they work with others, the strength of their wolf, and their mental control over it.

The victor of each trial has their name woven into the ancient tapestry. This is a true honor, acknowledging not only their worthiness in honoring the sacred pact but also their skills and discipline. These young warriors are often considered for important and strategic roles within the clans, and Alpha heirs feel they have earned their right to the title.

Should an individual triumph in both phases, they will have earned a rare and honored right to have their name carved into one of the rune stones that lie at the foot of the Rite of the Wild tablet, securing the respect of their peers and placing them among the honored few who have proven themselves worthy of both trials.

Lukan straightened his back and stretched, lifting his arms upward, inhaling the fresh, natural scent of early morning dew. A warm glow cast over the prairie toward the forest as young wolf-shifters from the region gathered near the Holy Rune Stone and the flanking smaller stones. They read the names etched in the smaller stones of all those who had years before victoriously completed both days of the Rite of the Wild.

While the Holy Rune Stone bore the tale of the first Alpha’s journey to receive the blessings of the Ancient Wolf Guardian, it filled the air with a mix of excitement and nervous energy as the young wolf-shifters gazed upon the carvings, their awe wrapped in the moment, a sacred weight, and the turning of a page into adulthood.

“Are you ready, runt?” came a voice from behind Lukan. He turned to see his older brother, Kalael, approaching. A faint smirk, tinged with disgust, crept across Kalael’s face, making Lukan’s blood boil. At seventeen, Kalael was just as determined to win, and Lukan knew it.

“I’ve been ready!” Lukan shot back, his jaw clenched as his pulse quickened under the weight of his brother’s energy. The tension surged through him like fire, fueling his adrenaline, but he refused to let his brother’s words get to him. “Are you ready?” he retorted.

“Oh, I’m always ready. But you say you’re ready, and somehow always fall behind. I’m sure this time won’t be any different. You will fail and be humiliated for the little runt you are,” Kalael snarled before walking off.

Lukan knew his brother felt threatened. With each passing year, Lukan’s skills and strength had noticeably improved. And he knew Kalael was always watching him, ready to capitalize on his failures. Kalael strived for approval and attention from the clan; he was the Thorne heir, after all. Meanwhile, Lukan received only pitying looks and, at times, indifference.

The sound of a distant horn cut through Lukan’s thoughts, signaling the start of the ceremony preparations. The gathered shifters fell silent as Alpha Raffi Thorne stepped forward, his commanding presence undeniable. He was a figure of power and dignity, his sharp eyes sweeping over the young shifters before him. At just sixteen, Raffi Thorne had already outmatched many of his peers and continued to dominate each year until he turned eighteen. His physical prowess and agility made him a force to be reckoned with.

“The time has come,” Alpha Raffi began, his deep voice resonating across the gathering. “The Rite of the Wild begins today, as it has every year for centuries. This sacred ceremony honors our bond with the wilderness and the forces that guide us. Today, each of you will harness the legacy of our ancestors. You are no longer children; you are the future leaders and warriors of our clans. You are on the path to becoming protectors, guardians of nature, and heirs to the wild spirit that flows through our blood.” His gaze swept over them, pausing briefly on Lukan. “The Rite of the Wild will test not only your strength, your fortitude, but also your bond to the wild, to the essence of nature itself.”

In that moment, Lukan felt the weight of Alpha Raffi’s words, a silent challenge that ignited a fire within him. And in that moment, something ancient stirred deep in his core, awakening instincts that had lain dormant, and with each heartbeat, he knew this was his year.

The Alpha raised his hands, motioning to the water beneath the Holy Rune Stone. “Before you embark on this journey, let the waters purify your soul and prepare you for the hunt. Step forward, each of you, and wash your hands and face in the sacred stream.”

One by one, the young shifters approached the stream, each taking their turn to cleanse in the cool, sacred water. When Lukan’s turn came, he knelt by the water, submerging his hands in the refreshing current. As the water flowed over his skin, a strange sense of peace washed over him, as if the spirit of the land was whispering to him, binding itself to his essence and weaving into the very fabric of his being.

As Lukan rose, an elder approached and placed a wreath of fragrant wildflowers around his head, a symbolic representation of one’s transition, or blooming, into a new stage of life. The sweet scent of the fresh blooms filled his lungs, grounding him in the moment and reminding him of the harmony with nature to which his people were bound.

With preparations complete, Alpha Raffi stepped to the podium at the center of the prairie, near the designated forest entrance, and commanded, “Shifters, come forth and gather around.” The young shifters obeyed, forming a tight ring around the Alpha.

His voice dropped to a reverent tone. “Now, we call upon the spirits of the wild to bless these young ones with the patience of the hunt, the wisdom of the Ancient Wolf Spirit, and the strength of the forest’s resilience. Guide their steps as they pursue the majestic creature of the wilderness, and may they learn to respect the untamed power that runs through our land and in our veins. Honor them in all you do this day. For we are Guardians, and family, always!”

“Guardians and family, always!” the young wolf shifters shouted in reply, their proud voices resounding through the clearing.

As the Alpha spoke, the surrounding air seemed to grow heavier around the young shifters, enveloping them completely with a charge from an unseen force that seemed to acknowledge them. Lukan felt his skin prickle; his wolf sensed something was near and close. He glanced around, searching for any sign that the others could feel it too. They only seemed fascinated by the sensation of energy enveloping them. Only Lukan seemed to sense the presence within it.

The prickling Lukan felt turned into a strange sensation building within him, causing his heart to beat faster. He closed his eyes, fighting to steady himself against it. A sudden, deep, primal energy surged through him, calling to the very core of his being and jolting him slightly. When he opened his eyes again, he was met with his father’s curious, searching gaze. It was as though he, too, had sensed the presence and shift within Lukan.

Shifting his focus away from Lukan, Alpha Raffi lifted his hand and pointed toward the forest where the first trial awaited. “In this stage, you will remain in your human form. Your task is to track a creature born of magic and nature, a representation of the spirit of the wild. It will be elusive, strong, and swift, testing your patience, your endurance, and your strength, and forcing you to strategize. Only one of you will return with its carved essence stone, and the victor of this challenge.”

The Alpha gestured to the elder mages of the prominent clans, who began chanting in unison. At the forest’s edge, in front of the designated entrance, lay the carved essence stone, shaped in the likeness of a bull elk. As the elder mages chanted, it began to rise, shimmer, and glow. Slowly, its stone form shifted and softened, expanding and yielding into flesh and sinew, yielding to life a majestic elk that stood in its place. Its antlers gleamed like polished ivory, and its eyes radiated the ancient power of the wild. It stood for a moment, as if studying the group, and then with a powerful leap, it headed into the forest and vanished into the trees.

Alpha Raffi’s voice boomed, “The time has come. May the spirit of the Ancient Wolf Guardian guide you all, and may your will be strong, your hearts true, and your senses sharp. Get ready.” The shifters turned around and adjusted themselves near the competition entrance of the forest, readying to hunt their prey.

Alpha Raffi’s gaze swept over the gathered shifters, and with a commanding growl that echoed through the clearing, his voice boomed, “The Rite of the Wild begins now! Prove your worth! Honor your heritage! Go!” And with that command, the shifters engaged.

Lukan didn’t hesitate. His body coiled with newfound energy, and he launched himself toward the forest entrance, his senses sharpening as they honed in on the elk’s scent. The goal was simple enough: overpower the creature and hold it until it yielded. But the real task was not only getting to it first but also holding on long enough to force it to submit.

Lukan’s muscles surged with explosive power as he raced through the forest, locked on his prey’s scent. With each powerful stride, exhilaration surged, and the world blurred into a vibrant tapestry of greens and browns. The crisp air filled his lungs, fueling his instincts and propelling him forward with effortless, primal force.

Every heartbeat pumped adrenaline through his veins, heightening his senses and sharpening his focus. This was his moment. This was his time to rise.

Up ahead, Lou, one of the seasoned wolf shifters, sprinted after the elk, his breath coming in heavy gasps and his muscles screaming with effort. Just as he closed the distance, he lunged forward, his hands reaching for the creature’s neck. For a fleeting moment, it felt like victory was within his grasp, but the elk was far more powerful and agile than Lou anticipated.

With a ferocious twist and a slight increase in speed, the magnificent beast flung Lou off its back, sending him hurtling through the air. Time seemed to slow as he crashed into a massive tree with a resounding thud, the impact reverberating through his body as he slid to the ground, dazed and bruised.

“Shit, Lou is down!” Kyra yelled, her voice sharp with urgency. Older than Lukan, she had been hot on Lou’s heels when he had lunged at the elk. Her amber eyes flashed with determined focus as she adjusted her speed and locked onto the elk. Seeing Lou fail, she took a deep breath and pumped her arms faster, digging her feet into the ground with each stride to close the distance created by the elk’s burst of speed after flinging Lou. Once she felt she was in a good position, in one fluid motion, she leaped into the air, using the trunk of a nearby tree to propel her forward with incredible momentum, aiming to land squarely on the elk’s back.

But the creature was quicker, darting to the side in the last seconds as if sensing her intent. Its hooves barely made a sound as it avoided her attack. Kyra’s nails sliced through empty air, missing the elk by mere inches. Her momentum carried her forward, crashing into the underbrush with a grunt as she tumbled through the dense foliage.

“Damn it!” Kyra cursed, pushing herself up, dirt and grass streaking her face, while leaves and twigs restyled her fashion. “That thing is fucking fast!”

Lukan, meanwhile, continued to pace the elk, his eyes locked on its every movement, a predator in pursuit. His speed matched the magical creature’s; whenever it increased speed, he did as well, pacing and mirroring its every move. Adrenaline coursed through Lukan as his mind raced, calculating and analyzing, all the while searching for the right moment to close the distance and attack.

Pierce, a broad-shouldered shifter and Alpha heir to the Castille clan, was the next to close the gap and attack. His muscles coiled with anticipation, eyes gleaming with fierce focus as he paced and positioned himself, ready to strike. Last year, he had claimed victory, earning the honor of having his name woven into the ancient tapestry. Now, at eighteen, this was his final year, and he burned with a singular purpose: to conquer both the trials of the Rite of the Wild and prove his dominance. He wanted his name carved into the sacred runestones, forever marking his worthiness as an Alpha heir.

His eyes narrowed as he positioned himself alongside the elk, locking onto it with fierce determination. His lips curled into a snarl as he surged forward, adrenaline fueling his every step. With a vigorous roar, Pierce launched himself, arms outstretched, aiming to wrestle the beast to the ground. But the elk, swift and cunning, veered sharply to the left, dodging with an almost unnatural grace. Pierce’s fingers grazed its hide, but before he could get a firm hold, he stumbled, crashing to the ground and skidding across the forest bed.

“Ah, damn!” Pierce growled, slamming his fists into the earth in frustration. Scrambling to his feet and his anger boiling, he shouted, “I want my name carved in the rune stones!” Undeterred, he bolted after the elk once more, refusing to give up.

Todd, quicker than most but more calculating, had trailed close behind along the trees, his pacing strategy similar to Lukan’s. His lean frame wove effortlessly like a shadow through the trees, staying low as he tracked the elk’s every move. Watching Pierce, Lou, and Kyra falter only sharpened his resolve to win. At sixteen, and the Alpha heir of the Asher clan, he saw this trial as more than a Rite; it would be his weapon, the perfect platform to crush the whispers about his shyness, to get noticed, and to prove himself worthy in his father’s eyes. His father never showed any disappointment in him, but Todd knew all too well how rumors could wound an Alpha’s pride if his heir were seen as unfit.

Spotting an opportunity, he sprang from a boulder, aiming for the elk’s flank. His timing was perfect, or so he thought. Just as he closed the gap, something struck his left knee, causing him to stumble. It was all the elk needed, and in the blink of an eye, its powerful antlers swung around, catching Todd off guard and sending him hurtling through the air.

He twisted mid-flight, barely avoiding being impaled, and crashed hard onto the forest floor, rolling to a painful stop.

“Shit!” Todd hissed, clutching his ribs as the air rushed from his lungs. Through the haze of pain and disorientation, he was almost certain he saw a smirk flicker across Kalael’s face as he was knocked off the elk.

“Fucking asshole,” he muttered before everything went dark.

Lukan barely had time to register their failures. The elk was still on the move, darting between trees and galloping over small bushes and logs, its powerful legs driving it deeper into the forest. But the thrill of the chase pulsed through him, fueling him with a driving desire. He could feel the essence of the elk’s wild spirit magic, could feel how in tune it was with the surrounding forest, almost as if it and the forest were working as one.

With Lukan’s singular focus, everything was a blurred backdrop. Only the elk and its path were in his line of sight. He could feel the other shifters around him, as well as the small creatures and insects. He sensed the positions of the trees and bushes, effortlessly avoiding them when they entered his path. He was in an almost mesmeric tune with the forest and the elk.

Suddenly, from across the forest, Kalael spotted him. He hadn’t realized Lukan had been pacing the elk all this time. He had assumed his brother was lagging behind with the other shifters. A surge of jealousy flared within Kalael. The sheer audacity of his brother to even try to win this challenge, as if he would be worthy enough to bear the honor of the Ancient Guardian Wolf spirit.

“Lukan, get back! Leave it to the real shifters!” he shouted; the venom in his tone was clear.

But Lukan didn’t slow, ignoring his brother’s voice, his focus solely on his prey.

Furious at being ignored, Kalael nearly lost control of his wolf. His pride, his very birthright, teetered on the edge of humiliation, and he was not about to let that happen. With a furious snarl, he drove his feet harder into the earth, each pounding step a vow that he would not be bested by his runt brother. He veered sharply, his mind calculating the exact moment to intercept the elk. As he angled into position, his chest thundered with the rhythm of his heart as instinct and desperation fused into one. With a final burst, he launched himself forward, arms outstretched, and collided with the beast, wrapping himself around the elk’s powerful neck.

Victory was finally in his hands, but in the moment of his excitement, the elk reared back violently. Kalael’s grip slipped as the beast bucked with such raw strength that it lifted him clean off the ground. While both he and the elk were in mid-air, Kalael scrambled to recover, reaching forward, his fingers brushing against an antler in a desperate attempt to hold on. But before he could secure his grip, the elk gave a final, savage toss, sending him flying in the air again. The world spun, and he crashed into two shifters running behind, all three slamming into the ground in a tangle of limbs and groans, while the elk sped off.

This chaos brought Lukan the opening he needed. The elk’s wild thrashing had momentarily slowed its pace, startling some of the other shifters and breaking their momentum. But Lukan remained undeterred, his focus unwavering. He was in tune with nature and everything within it. Somewhere in his mind, he knew it was time.

A surge of energy charged through him, flooding his muscles with raw power. He quickened his pace, his legs powerful and light at the same time as they pushed and lifted off the ground, giving Lukan a powerful stride. He then began sprinting at full speed ahead of the elk, pulling away until he positioned himself far enough in front to turn and face it.

A deep growl rumbled from his chest as he dug his feet into the earth, the ground seeming to answer, lending power once more to his essence. He then sprinted at full speed toward the elk. In one fluid burst, he launched himself into the air with all his strength, meeting the elk head-on mid-stride. His hands grabbed hold of its antlers, momentum swinging him around its massive frame. With feral precision, he wrapped his legs tight around its torso, squeezing tightly and digging into its sides, while his arms clamped around its neck in a fierce headlock. The forest rang with the raw clash of will and strength, man and beast locked in battle.

Lukan held on tight; every muscle in his body screamed as they worked to subdue the powerful bull elk. Yet beneath that strain and onset of muscle failure, he felt an incredible surge of power unlike anything he had ever experienced. His heart pounded, adrenaline racing through him, but there was also a calm focus, a deep instinct guiding his every move. He could feel the wild energy of the elk beneath him, fighting with all its might, but he didn’t waver. He knew he would be victorious.

The elk bucked and thrashed, its shrill cry splitting the air as it fought with wild fury to throw Lukan off and break free of his chokehold. But Lukan refused to let go. He growled through clenched teeth, muscles straining as his grip tightened with unyielding force. The struggle felt endless, as every fiber of Lukan’s strength poured into subduing the beast. In his mind, he vowed that the elk would tire before he gave in.

Gradually, after what seemed like a lifetime of punishment, its violent thrashing began to slow, each heave weaker than the last. Lukan sensed the creature’s strength slipping, its resistance faltering. He tightened his hold once more, refusing to relent until the mighty beast gave a final shudder and yielded to its chosen champion. Only then did Lukan’s muscles relax, just as the creature stilled beneath him. Its massive form began to shrink and dissolve, the living flesh fading away until, in its place, the familiar shape of the rune-carved stone remained.

A rush of emotions hit Lukan all at once. Relief, triumph, and a primal surge of victory squashed the doubts that had plagued him. No more whispers that he wasn’t strong enough or worthy enough. He had done it. He was the winner of the first trial of the Rite of the Wild. A smile spread across his face as his chest swelled with pride.

From the shadows of the trees, a judge overseeing the hunt leaped down, blowing a horn to signal the end of the chase. Lukan was victorious. He had won not through force alone, but through patience, strategy, and the bond he felt with the wild.

Clasping the rune stone in his hands, Lukan approached his father and the head elders, his heart pounding with a mix of pride and victory. The stone felt light in his grip, overshadowed by the significance of this moment. He could sense the murmurs of all the various clans and their members around him, every eye fixed on him, their anticipation palpable.

He stood before his father, Alpha Raffi Thorne, and the head elders, offering the stone in both hands as a symbol of his victory. His father’s gaze softened, and for the first time, Lukan saw pride in his father’s eyes.

Alpha Raffi nodded, his lips curving slightly into a rare smile as he placed a firm hand on Lukan’s shoulder, a silent acknowledgment of his achievement.

The head elder of the Rite of the Wild, Elder Aariz of the Byrd clan, stepped forward, raising the ceremonial quill. “Lukan Thorne, second son of Alpha Raffi Thorne of the Grand Alpha Thorne clan, has captured the spirit of the wild,” he proclaimed, his voice resonating among all wolf-shifters in attendance. With deliberate care, the elder dipped the phoenix quill into the ink of Tarnisas and inscribed Lukan’s name onto the ancient tapestry, a tradition passed down through the ages, forever marking his place in the clan’s legacy.

Lukan watched with pride as his name, written with the black ink of Tarnisas, turned gold on the tapestry. His name would forever be written alongside the other victorious shifters. At just fourteen, he had proven himself. He had shown them all who he truly was, and it had been solidified in history.

As the evening celebration of the first trial buzzed around them, Kalael strode up to Lukan, his expression dark and brooding. “So, little brother,” he sneered, his voice low and laced with deadly venom. “I see you decided to show off. You think today changes anything? Sorry, it doesn’t. You’re still a weak little runt, and today was nothing but sheer luck!”

Lukan’s eyebrows shot up in surprise at the sickening disgust in his brother’s tone. He earned the right to have his name on the tapestry.

“Showing off? What does that even mean? I was part of the hunt like everyone else! I did what I was supposed to do, and I won!”

“Oh, please! You waited for the rest of us to tire it out. I HAD HIM! But you just had to swoop in and steal my moment! Don’t pretend you aren’t basking in all this attention, you fucking runt!” Kalael seethed.

“That’s not fair, Kalael!” Lukan growled, his fists clenched at his sides. “I’m a wolf-shifter like the rest of you! And I’m the one who tackled it and held it down! Not you!”

Kalael stepped closer, his voice now dropping to a dangerous whisper. “Remember your place, Lukan. I’m next in line to be Alpha, not you. Don’t you forget that, or you will regret it.”

Lukan took a half-step back, trying to steady himself. “I’ve never challenged that. It’s your right to be Alpha.” His voice trembled slightly, a mix of defiance and frustration. It was never good to interfere in ancient and traditional ways. So he never allowed himself to even dream of the Alpha position. Besides, it was always the eldest son who inherited the position.

“You’d better not!” Kalael threatened, his eyes blazing with fury. “A runt like you could never be an Alpha!”

Just then, Bernie, Alpha Raffi’s Beta, approached, sensing the charged atmosphere. “Boys, is everything all right here?” His voice was calm, but his eyes were sharp and watchful. He’d long since learned to recognize when the brothers’ rivalry was on the verge of boiling over.

Kalael quickly smoothed his expression, adopting an insincere smile, before turning to the Beta. “Of course, Beta Bernie. We were just having a little brotherly chat. I was just congratulating Lukan on his win.”

Lukan forced a nod, trying to hide the anger simmering beneath his skin. But his eyes told a different story.

Bernie glanced between them, a flicker of concern darkening his expression. But he knew now wasn’t the time to address the issue, not with all the clans gathered in one place. The Thorne clan was the main wolf clan and was always being watched.

“Good. Remember, strength comes from unity. We are guardians and family, always.” He reminded them.

“Of course,” Kalael replied stiffly, his voice tight, a mask of composure stretched thin over his rage. “Guardians and family, always.” He shot Lukan a final warning glance before walking away.

Lukan sighed, muttering under his breath, “Guardians and family, always.” His eyes watched as his brother left, resolve hardening inside him. He knew things were about to change, and he knew Kalael could feel it too. No longer would he be the weak little brother, cowering in Kalael’s shadow. He was ready to forge his own path and claim his rightful place within the Thorne clan.

“I am not a runt anymore,” he said under his breath, forcing himself to calm down. Besides, he had another day of competition to prepare for.

“No, you definitely are not,” Bernie agreed, startling Lukan, who had forgotten Bernie was still there.

“You have definitely proven yourself more than worthy, Lukan. Your father is proud. And your mother would have been too.”

With that, Lukan felt even more reassured. The very thought that his father was proud of him boosted his confidence. He knew his uncle Bernie, the Beta of the clan, would not lie. Tomorrow, he would also win the second part of the Rite of the Wild, and his name would be carved into the rune stones.

He would no longer be pitied.


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