What is your opinion?
One of The Best Fantasy Books in Here
"Starlit Vow is a captivating book with an engaging storyline. The main character is very well-written, and the reader can root for her. The trials are unique and interesting so far, and a lot is set up in the opening chapters. There’s also a looming threat that keeps you on edge, and the suspense towards it is palpable. However, there are some grammatical mistakes in the book, which don’t really detract from the experience. Overall, Starlit Vow is a great read, and I definitely recommend it to anyone. Nice work, Sophie 😉! Keep it up 🫶💖."
It's a good first draft
"I love the concept and I'm excited to see where it goes. Grammatically, it could use some polish, and you lean on tropes when you could twist them for more interest. In places, you end up in the weeds of the words instead of letting the reader immerse themself in the scene. I can't wait to see how your story grows."
