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Excellent!

"This book is gripping me! And I’m a writer!"

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Review

"I’m looking forward to what happens next. "

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Moonlit Secret

"Love it. Need to read the rest of it nowwww"

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What's ahead

"Anxiously waiting to see where Cheyanne's life takes her. This is well written with a lot of emotions."

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Past Tense should be present tense

"Loving the story and characters. But the tenses are wrong and I keep having to correct them in my head. "

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Beautiful bastard

"Interesting plot. The heroine struggles on many levels. Some unrealistic reaction to life bit for the most part it carries the reader along."

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I like the story line how it's going

"I like the storyline "

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Moonlit secret

"It’s good and plot is good don’t like how author has written the dialogue (when people speak) as if it’s one person imagining how others will reply. Aka instead of saying “Jon said” it’s written as “then Jon will say”. "

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Moonlit Secret

"I also really enjoyed this story and have been looking forward to its continuation. It has a great foundation from which to carry on the story. Keep up the great work!"

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.look forward to reading more

"I am not a fan of writing a review before ready a whole story"

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