Part One
Grade 12
Age: 18
This story contains themes of: cheating, explicit imagery
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Alex - Brad and I are inseparable, and the NHL has been our dream since we could shoot a puck. That's why I've put off telling my best friend I'm in love with him for over five years, so I don't ruin it. But college is almost over and my window to confess is closing. When the Team Captain suggests a plan, I go along with it, hoping it will awaken something in Brad, so that he'll really see me, and maybe even love me. - Brad - I've been his first everything. We took our first steps together, started school together, played our first ice hockey game together. Alex’s first has always been me. I was his first hug, his first kiss, and the first one to go down on him. Because he's my friend, and I can't let my friend go about without popping those cherries. And it’s fine, it’s great. We’ll always be friends, and we’ll have always have those memories. Just because I’m out every night with a different puck bunny doesn’t mean I feel any different. Until he tells me he's going on a date…with the team captain…and then that I find out Alex has been a virgin this whole time. But I'm not having it. I've been Alex's first for everything - it's only natural I'd be his first puck too.
Grade 12
Age: 18
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jo987_123: This is a good story, but it needs a good editor to go through this iteration and fix the mistakes. The pov changes from 1st person to 3rd person, often, and sometimes within one sentence. It needs a liberal sprinkling of punctuation marks throughout, and a decision needs to be made about the char...
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