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A collection of ramblings. Diving into the sadness and unfairness of life. A place to be authentic and raw.
You may think this is going to help you. It isn’t.
I don’t intend to make promises i can’t keep. If you used me as a north star, your directions were wrong.
Did you really think, I of all people, would have the answers?
Please go back to playing make-believe. Where the world was perfect and nothing could hurt you. It was better that way.
Know this before you proceed. There is no “Guide”.
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Don’t say I didn’t warn you.
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Intro
mariedavismd312: This was Avery spiritual read. The last 2 chapters where very disappointing. That was such a let down unless there is a sequel. Burgess should have been punished for what he did. There was no explanation for his hatred for Jeremiah. I figured he was being set but just had the wrong person. I loved ...
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Sophia: Hey!The tension between Gemma and Joseph feels very raw and personal, have you thought about how this dynamic might resonate with readers if you expanded the story into a longer ebook?
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Sophia: Hey Rujuta!Bethany’s obsession with Sunset Boulevard and her rituals feel so visual. Have you ever thought about explaining her 112th movie watch through illustration? I can imagine a comic panel showing her intense expressions and messy takeaway boxes.
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Olivia: Your story has awesome comic potential! I can draw one discounted test page so you can get a feel for my visual approach.Instagram: @oliviaharper_71Twitter: @HarperOliv56351
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Sienna Hayes : Hi, I’m Sienna! I read your story and I really liked it. While reading it, I was already imagining the scenes as visuals in my mind. I would love to adapt your story into comic art. I’m really passionate about creating comics, especially adapting stories into visual form. Your story could look amazi...
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Sienna Hayes : Hi, I’m Sienna! I read your story and I really liked it. While reading it, I was already imagining the scenes as visuals in my mind. I would love to adapt your story into comic art. I’m really passionate about creating comics, especially adapting stories into visual form. Your story could look amazi...
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Elouise33: I loved this short story. One spicy chapter was all it needed to leave me wanting more.
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Miriam0011: It was a pleasure reading and analyzing your writing you’re doing fantastic work. It’s always motivating to see such creativity. Are you working on a story these days?
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Miriam0011: Hi! I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed your story your writing style is truly engaging and unique. It kept me hooked from start to finish. I’d love to know, what inspired you to start writing stories?
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