The Vampire's Princess

gmacaro

31 chapters read

the vampire's princess

"such a great story. vampires elves witches and demons. who could ask for more. the main charaters, valin and evony, are so real. her story is unfolding slowly but oh the suspense along the way, i thourghly and completly enoyed ever sentence. hope many more will read. cant wait for a second part....maybe. it leaves you in suspense so i am hoping for a part two soon. \"

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Jesca

31 chapters read

Amazing

"Amazing story! Hope it will continue with a book 2. "

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Siukwan

27 chapters read

Enjoyable

"This story was amazing. Can't wait for part 2. I love your writing ❤️"

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Putri

30 chapters read

Love it

"Intriguing story. Hope there is part 2 soon"

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mmslanker

30 chapters read

Excited for the sequel!

"This was a captivating story; well done! All of the characters bring something valuable to the table, and the imagery is beautiful. Could use an edit, but the spelling and grammar mistakes are hardly distracting. The shocking twist near the end is leaving me in need of part 2!"

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gia

27 chapters read

Great story!

"I love the communication between Valin and Evony; it's so refreshing to see, as most stories lack it. The POV switches are also very helpful in giving more depth and understanding of the characters."

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virgie

22 chapters read

Virgie's Take

"Valin was a dreamboat. Glad that our little witch felt the insincerity of Harold. Seems like the warlock is further invading her thoughts."

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Isarah

28 chapters read

Story overall

"Very good ❤️"

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Barbra

27 chapters read

Vampire's Princess

"This story held my interest the entire time. I love a strong female and I love a slow burn. Evony may not know what she wants, but she knows what she doesn't want - and that's to be told what to do. Same Evony. Same. 🤣 It was nice to see this authors portrayal of the species and world listed, some differed from the norm and it was refreshing to read something unique. I like the plot and can't wait to find out what happens in the 2nd book. There are spelling errors and minor changes from 1st to 3rd view - but not enough that it's a distraction. This was a great read. Thank you for sharing! "

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jessica

28 chapters read

The Vampires princess

"Love this story"

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