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Relatable , makes you want to cheer for both MC and ML
"I like how the chapters transition in POV’s between Anna and Sam, The struggles are far too relatable and hence it makes you cheer for both of their happiness. The writing is easy and fluid."
A very promising start (read all four chapters posted so far)
"Off the bat, Anna's weariness while she balances work and motherhood, even life, in general, drew me in. Her kid is being b*llied, and she takes action, not by causing drama but by reaching out to the one person who should have put an end to it. Sam's struggling too and has lost interest in work and life too. Both have broken marriages, yet the subtle metaphors and symbolism (like their homes) used to show their state of mind are beautifully conveyed. In the first four chapters, Anna reaches out to Sam but protects her identity while informing Sam of her concerns. Also, she'd dealing sleazy boss; as a single mom trying to protect her career, she's mature yet often passive, which I appreciated. I am also grateful for how the author has driven home the point that adults deserve love and affection such as Anna seeking intimacy, pillow talk, affection, and cuddles. I was watching telly on the weekend while folding laundry. There was a new show, not a romcom, but a 'heartfelt' drama, about a 30ish-40ish divorced mother looking for love and her struggles, (same concept) except the MC was depicted behaving like an immature twit, or a greenhorn tween with no clue about life. The characters' behaviour made no sense. Sorry, that was not cute. In five minutes, I moved on. It felt like a pathetic, even an intolerable, mockery. Converge is on the other end of that spectrum. While realistic, the depictions and struggles, even thoughts of the MCs are relatable to most adults, yet there is a vein of tenderness that will have readers rooting for both the MCs which makes it more magical down the line as the story progresses. Also, the cover is lovely. Dare I suggest adding a summary not an extract in the beginning? Keep writing, Frankie, coz I really enjoyed it so far and look forward to the updates. "
