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Captivating

"This story is captivating. The descriptive writing helps bring me in to visualize not only the characters but the atmosphere. I find myself eager to see what happens next. I look forward to getting to know both characters and explore the world this author has created."

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…but freed by the light.

"You don’t become a feared and respected war general without years of hard work and sacrifice. Aslan, knows this. Intelligent and intimidating with fierce good looks, he has earned every medal that is pinned on his military jacket and his soldiers pay him respect accordingly. There is nothing Aslan won’t do if it means succeeding in his mission. Murder, and betrayal are all fair play. The only thing that troubles Aslan, is he loosing his soul as he gains success? Does it matter? Beautiful, dark-haired Sahar is also committed to her ideal of success. She works as a software engineer in the heart of Chicago. Every paycheck earned means another step up for her family in Pakistan. Therefore Sahar feels she has no time for relationships. Certainly nothing as complicated and time-devoting as falling in love. What will happen when these two officially meet? I’m not sure yet. (At the time of this review, I’ve only read up to Chapter Five.) But the two leads have already shared a glance at a party and believe me the sparks were flying. Authorzee is quite a skilled writer. So much so that I’m not completely sure if English is a second language for her/him. Authorzee writes with the authority and skill of a native English speaker. At any rate I recommend checking out, this addictive, romantic novel. You know the two main characters need each other. It’s just a matter of time when they are willing to admit to that need. "

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i want more

"i love how every character is described so well and how sahar feels toward him without meeting. every chapter has new heart felt moments. i love it and highly recommend it. well, now i want book 2 for this i mean how can you just kill both of them i want the other book too. I love the way how you made the cliffhanger. But kindly upload the second book."

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Engaging

"I would suggest this book to everyone. Looking forward to finish reading this book ASAP. I love the way how your characters are so well-defined. Also, their emotions are explained up to the mark. The chapters are short which makes it easy to read. Keep up the good work, author. ❤️✨"

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An engaging storyline

" This is an engaging story with short chapters, making it easy for readers to follow. The author has a great command of vocabulary, skillfully shaping the narrative. I highly recommend this book. "

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Bound by Darkness

"Admirable description of contrasting emotions: Gen Aslan's duty vs desire and Sahar's dreamer and doer promises an interesting interaction between the two characters. Appears to be evolving into a fresh slant to a mythos. Very readable "

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Great book!

"I chose this rating because, It's Very intriguing, I liked that it was locked into the plot as soon as I read the first sentence, I'm interested to learn more about the world they live in and the adventures they'll have. My only slight dislike would be maybe avoiding another skip like the one at the very beginning. But other than that I definitely recommend to older teens, great book! 👍"

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Great read!

"I love how complex the main characters are, they're well-written and they feel real in their description. Aslan is morally grey which I love and I can't wait for more interactions between MMC and FMC. I feel like the tension of the story is really effective. The storyline and plot is also really great. The short chapters make it easy to keep up and offer enough details to keep us guessing but also satisfied after a chapter. The structure is nice; maybe add more context around certain scenes/smoother transition between chapters so we don't get confused on the setting. Honestly, other than that, you've got a good thing going and I can't wait for more!"

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General Review* !

"If you're a fan of 'Haunting Adeline,' you'll absolutely adore this book! The characters stole my heart - beautifully crafted, relatable, and authentic. The storyline? Absolutely amazing! Twists and turns kept me hooked.What sealed the deal? Short, snappy chapters that made this unputdownable read a win-win !"

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