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Strong Story

"I find this story very intriguing. Surprise twists."

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Best plot ever read

"Even I don’t like the character of Ryan, the story it’s written in a way that absorbs you in. The plot is amazing and the dialogues are strong and well built."

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The alpha contract

"I love the plot"

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Good story

"Enjoying the story"

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Please finish it

"Just when it starts getting really good, it's unfinished 😩"

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I don't like how it just randomly stopped when it was just starting to get good

"I don't like how it just randomly stopped when it was just starting to get good"

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Very good! Suspenseful!

"Great writing. Great characters. Descriptive and easy to follow. Well done!"

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A MAGNIFICENT READ

"I don't even know where to start ,but this is one of the best stories I've ever read. The plot keeps me in suspense and it makes me more curious about what's going to happen next. It just keeps me going. This is really amazing 👏💕"

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Family

"I think it's good that she stood up to someone who doesn't care about her."

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Please continue

"I very much enjoyed this story. There's a lot going on & the story draws you in several ways. I truly hope you are able to continue this story. "

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Alphas bargain

"Good story. Where is the rest of it?"

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Impecable

"Hasta ahora va re bien. El desarrollo de los personajes es exquisito y la forma en la que están narradas las escenas es muy buena."

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Love

"I love this so far and hope that Ryan will wake up and realize he loves her. I just hope we get a new chapter soon. I hate having to wait to see what’s going to happen."

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The Alpha's bargain

"Loved the beginning of this book great characters amazing plot but don't start it because 2 mths with no updates makes me wonder if this author gave up or moved on sad because I was really enjoying it"

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The Alpha’s Bargain

"I’m like this so far. It always a joy to see an Alpha with all the control learn that he can’t control everyone. Excited to see this unfold."

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It’s nicely writing the characters are great.

"There is something going on. I want to read not write. But write it down to do!"

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Review

"Names keeping changing"

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Suspense

"I really like what I think is a slow burn romance. The plot is still revealing itself. Have not been able to put it down so far. "

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S.m.shele

"Good book reading 3 days in a row"

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Its ok

"I wouldn’t say its a slow burn more of a story dragging. The AI talk is annoying word salad. Its a good plot but man is the main character stupid...."

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