What is your opinion?
Not the common love story
"A very well written story, with an unique style. Actually enjoyed the upside down “construction” of the chapters! It appears as if the character is recounting the events to you in person, bringing you more into the story. There were some chapters (including Vee’s confession one) during which I almost forgot to breathe, that’s how emerged I was into the story! 😅 Also, great storyline and love the uncommon ending (kind of broke me in a good way). ❤️ I would’ve probably loved the story even more if it had been paced a bit slower and with a bit more detail, but for your first piece of writing it is very good! Keep it up! 👏🏻"
Essence
"I found this to be a sad short story. It was well written. It does show how sometimes. Friendship can turn to love but once broken the friendship is also gone"
Has potential, great start
"I'm enjoying this story as knowing it's the authors first one we all start somewhere. Great characters and interesting plot. I've enjoyed it so far and will continue to read. Great job and well done 👏🏽😊"
Continuation
"The chapters are not syncing. It would be nice if there is a continuation in a plot rather than feel neglected then start to figure thing out later"
