What is your opinion?
So good
""Hey love this story It is really good, I had recommend this story to my friends and my sister and they loved it very much, I hope u keep writing story like this 😊 ""
nice
"hey guys this is my first time writing a novella like this, I hope u guys will support"
Promising tale, but could use improvement
"The story is written well, but the plot suffers from some lack of logic and background, in my opinion. The good idea is there, and with some development here and there, I think it would improve quite a bit. The characters sadly lack background and personality, so I found it difficult to care about what happened to them and in a romance it's pretty heavy fault, but, again, there's plenty space to improve. Overall, it's nice for anyone looking for a quick time travel flick, but it could use more in-depth characters and story. "
more chapters
"The story itself is cute and compelling. just that the feeling you get is that only the turning chapters were written. in between chapters two or three more chapters minimum would have been needed to make it clearer what was happening, why it was happening, and to mature feelings and actions among the characters. It almost seems like an outline of the actual story. too bad because the basic idea is very nice. "
